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:iconnharlie:
:C I can't believe I missed your join.me! oh, yeah-this is a critique. Lol, second of the day.

First off, this could've used a bit more color and texture-it doesn't quite catch the eye and line-art is a bit sketchy for my taste.

Now on to the legs, I find that it's feet are unproportional considering the distance. They could also use a bit more flattening because unless it was your intent-they look like they're pinching the ground.

I do like the originality of this and that your signature is neat and out of the way, but noticeable.

The claws seem like they are a bit too stubby for such a scary creature though and the tail could use more of a point also.

I love the eye and I also like that this isn't as pixelly as the other peice I critiqued.

The arms are at a good angle and are exceptionally proportional, but seeing as this is a make-belief creature, proportional isn't always in the picture.
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:iconpipesootwolf:
PipeSootWolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I suck at art -_-
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:iconnharlie:
Nharlie Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Not true-practice makes perfect and you've improved so much
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:iconpipesootwolf:
PipeSootWolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
LOL thanks :). I'm one of those people who can't take helpful critiques. Ironic right :3 ?
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:iconnharlie:
Nharlie Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
? Lol
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