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:iconnharlie:
haha, here's my critique(and let's hope my coding works);

Positives
-I love your designs, pallete and style.

-You have a neat and unique signature

-the art is reasonably proportional

Negatives
-The top lip shouldn't jut out so far though, and the ear has a stray line.

-The line-art is a bit fuzzy, maybe try using a smaller brush or erasing around it.

-you should also try using a bigger canvas because the art is a bit pixally, then the design and line-art would come out smooth

-another suggestion is to scale your signature smaller because as I look at the art my eyes dart back-and-forth

-and yet, one more suggestion is to not draw a line where the head ends, it looks like his head was cut off-you should try to make the color slowly faint out
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PipeSootWolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I see what you mean. THANK YOU not many people comment to help me with my art.

I hate paint on my com. It's so frustrating.
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Nharlie Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No problems, when I have time I like to help

My tablet is old and it draws shaky lines so I can't use ms paint, I've tried-how do you do it? X3 layers are my thing, couldn't live without em
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PipeSootWolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't know .... I'M MAGICAL :D . Funny I have never used layers in my life. I wanna try sai cause paint is just too slow when i'm trying to clean up lines and other things i try to draw.
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Nharlie Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Me and moon agree that sai's a life saver-although her art is way better. Sai is the fastest program ever, when you click on it, in 3 seconds it'll be ready for drawing. There is a free trial, lol mighta pirated mine
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PipeSootWolf Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol i'll have tp try sai :D
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Nharlie Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yay!
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PipeSootWolf Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol :3
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